tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695106310875450565.post1661874999605078462..comments2023-09-19T11:10:39.328-05:00Comments on Writer on a Horse: 2017 Progressive PoemPatricia J. Weaverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06044354515656710902noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695106310875450565.post-63344981593912108482017-04-29T06:27:27.347-05:002017-04-29T06:27:27.347-05:00I'm late to appreciate each and every line. B...I'm late to appreciate each and every line. Back to the dragon--with some raw action! This goes well with the animal sounds our speaker knows by heart. Thank you!Heidi Mordhorsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695106310875450565.post-57372276535742885612017-04-24T11:14:08.611-05:002017-04-24T11:14:08.611-05:00Such a lively, colorful line - Thank you, Pat! (I...Such a lively, colorful line - Thank you, Pat! (I'm playing catchup after being gone at a poetry conference all weeekend.) :0)Robyn Hood Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07279289715664168026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695106310875450565.post-82839424529452019062017-04-23T16:42:19.548-05:002017-04-23T16:42:19.548-05:00Perfect line and perfect timing. Flash and rip add...Perfect line and perfect timing. Flash and rip add action and I wonder about the prophecy. Penny Parker Klostermannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15043861965501388155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695106310875450565.post-8594492845914207272017-04-20T19:10:01.452-05:002017-04-20T19:10:01.452-05:00I second all of the above....really a great line.....I second all of the above....really a great line...the blue scales, the clashing, the prophecy...... love that you have brought it here. Now to see what the next line is. I agree, this gets exciting and is wonderful. Like I said, I agree with all of the other commenters!<br />skanny17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07488350213473016250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695106310875450565.post-79437615518168080622017-04-20T14:59:54.316-05:002017-04-20T14:59:54.316-05:00
Great line development--blue scales, rip, clash a...<br />Great line development--blue scales, rip, clash and a prophecy. I love where this line takes the poem. Thanks for a great job.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695106310875450565.post-51126617180231239102017-04-19T19:13:19.452-05:002017-04-19T19:13:19.452-05:00Inquiring minds want to know "What is the pro...Inquiring minds want to know "What is the prophecy?" <br /><br />Vivid scales & claws. .... I'm getting an image . . . <br /><br />Thank you for this riveting line!jan godown anninohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00091996699597066230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695106310875450565.post-78539252589470652922017-04-19T13:45:25.715-05:002017-04-19T13:45:25.715-05:00Prophecy! Such a perfect word for right now. This...Prophecy! Such a perfect word for right now. This is exciting, and you're so right about being part of something wonderful... xxAmy LVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695106310875450565.post-37650917603402586902017-04-19T10:07:11.455-05:002017-04-19T10:07:11.455-05:00Oh I can see those claws and scales....and what is...Oh I can see those claws and scales....and what is the prophecy?? Thanks for the great line!Buffy Silvermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07223895917772531703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695106310875450565.post-46710387745721280392017-04-19T07:58:24.642-05:002017-04-19T07:58:24.642-05:00That hidden story emerges! I love "The Prophe...That hidden story emerges! I love "The Prophecy Begins", opens the story even more, and the dragon lore is back!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.com